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HI!
I have to tell you Andrej, also "The Boss' Toy" was an interesting read. What is kind of funny the number of people think that the Mafia or the KKK doesn't exist any more. When really that is far from the truth.
Now for the story. Silvio brother Giuseppe, sister Maria and kind of play mate Joe & Dad Benito: I find the way you started the book to be interesting. A Dad that loved his wife and the wife was more the strong seller in the family business. That when Benito lost his wife, the business slack off and he had to go and see the "God-Father" for a loan and we all know what it is like borrowing from a loan shark. There is always the possible pit falls.
To which there was when the Original "God-Father" died and his son Don Antony Russo took over and ripped up the deal Benito had with his Dad.
Benito's son Silvio had a great love for his parents and he knew at a young age he was for sure different than his brother. Yet had to be quiet about it with his brother's remarks and careful when fooling around with his friend Joe that got him started in a weird way.
So when the collectors came and made their point with Dad, Benito, it was Silvio that went to work in figuring a way to help his beloved Dad. This whole part of & Don Antony Russo? First off it doesn't surprise me what Benito's son did without his Dad knowing. Two is that I think Don Anthony is an asshole the way he treated the lad at his age and taking advantage of the desire that now Silvio liked, wanted to do to protect his Dad he loved. Yet, I understand a deal is a deal. To show that he is the Boss Man and making a point to embarrass first his Son Robert, walking in and taking Chris D'Angelo, away from his son Robert and using him for his own pleasure.
Then with Silvio wanting to protect his Dad, family and the family usiness, to have Chris paged and come into the office and see him leaning over the desk and taking it from Don Anthony... "your services are no longer needed." The deal drawn up and papers signed and Silvio allowed to go home for the last time, put the papers in a safe place. Then back to Don Anthony and he begins his life at 16/17 service duties to the Boss.
Years pass and Vito comes into the picture and though slow it gradually over a rough period He and Silvio developed a small and growing friendship, being honest of feelings with each other. Vito being upset with what his new friend, that he has the hots for and thinking really loves, he did for his Dad and Don Anthony just using him as a toy...
To the point of making love with each other knowing dangerous and so Stan jealous and he tells Don Anthony and hell breaks loose. To which Don Anthony wanting Vito dead.
Then come Don Anthony wrong place wrong time and two gangs and he dies... To Vito meeting up with Robert and getting the paperwork and documents Don Anthony had on Silvio's Dad Benito and the business, got the documents and things were made clear to Robert about him and Chris... The slow process of Vito & Silvio to get to freedom...
That of New Zealand where Peter comes back in the picture for the Fake ID's and documents.. To have a conversation with the idea of escaping with Peter and telling Vito that he, Peter find out that Vito brother to be thought straight Stefano loved boys and Vito finding it hard.
Stefano helped more than Vito and Silvio knew and they were off and all went well to land in Wellington, New Zealand and a whole new life! Gayness was open and age was not much of a issue, but with Vito and Silvio they were true to each other. They built their home and even added as their gay friend/family grew and their business took off and the connections in a gay world open up and blossomed.
They kept information coming on their family back in America but their new life and their growing strong love for each other for now stayed in Wellington, NZ... With the guys young, working for them and then boy-friends and then living as a family!!
The story was a bit rough but it is the Mafia and knowing what I know pretty much right on with that. As for the love between the men, that is and was quite common and nothing said as not out of place, just allowed to go on. The wife's knew their place and as long as they were taken care of they were happy in the family clan...
The part of the love for younger boys. Well here in American it is a forbidden thing. So, whether I think it is right or wrong is of no matter because of the laws here in America. Yet, have to say if a lad is willing with a older person and not forcing, beating, raping and using drugs to get the lads to do what they want to satisfy them. I personally don't see what the issue is. As there are those that love being with a older person then them.
I really have a issue with babies and children up to the age of 12/15 as they really don't really know what they want and thus should be not touched. Yet, there is certain states here that 16 is a legal age. Finding it funny one of the places is right in Washington D.C.
For the over all of the book that you wrote Sir, I'd say it was pretty good with the mafia as it would take a long time to go in how and why they are what they are. More than likely people would not take an interest in that. Yet, the love of the son and the Dad and how the son went forth and offered his body that to me is one of strong courage and spirit to protect his Dad and Dad's business for Dad and the rest of the family!!
It is amazing and nice that in the story the son's (some) wanted to see it go in a different direction and later to find it did with the Mafia and those that just left and made a whole new life!!
I like the story my good man! Again thanks for sharing it with me.
Loving friendship, hugs Geno
PS: Still can't help to think there is a part of you in each of the stories I've read so far.
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Friday, 27 January 2006 |
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Hi Andrej,
I just finished another of your stories, The Boss' Toy, and I enjoyed it very much. I know that you wrote it some time ago, but I'm kind of jumping around your site, looking at whatever catches my attention. This story certainly did, and I am so glad I could read it. Your site and stories are wonderful and you are very much appreciated.
I also loved counting to ten, the hypnotism story! So cool that Ken was hypnotized so easily. I know that part was not that realistic, but it sure served him right. What a creep. Ah, well, true love won out in the end. You are such a romantic. That's a good thing.
Norma
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Friday, 20 August 2004 |
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I have finished four of your stories: Goldfinch, Black Clover, The Boss' Toy and Happy Xmas Neil & Norman.
It is hard for me to pick my favorite between Goldfinch and Black Clover.
I really liked Goldie, your characterizations are good, and I felt I could see the characters in action reading the story. I was thrown off a little by the geography; I had trouble at times figuring out where Goldie was. Other than that, the story is good.
Black Clover, I think, is probably a shade more my favorite, after all. I recall reading chapters, then I would go home, and wonder where that book was with the Arabian story! Then I would have to shake myself to remember it is on the computer at work!
I feel you did an excellent job on the historical accuracy of the area and times in that story. I feel great that our hero succeeded and did well. Thanks for a great story.
Happy XMas... was the first story I read. I was slightly confused by the back and forth in time frames, at first, but I caught on. It was very realistic how you portrayed the slow blossoming of Neil and Norman's relationship, the confusion, back-tracking, and so on. Another great story!
The Boss' Toy, well, I am glad Sylvio got free of the horrible Don, but I have a hard time reading stories where children are abused/hurt in any way. Even movies showing kids getting hurt bother me. I know these are just stories, but I have a vivid imagination, and I get drawn into the plots as if they are real; that is why I get upset about kids being hurt/killed.
I have started the 7 Brothers story, I'll let you have feedback when I am done.
God bless you, and Matt: many long years together!!
James
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Saturday, 19 October 2002 |
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Mr. Koymasky,
I recently read you short story, The Boss' Toy, which I discovered in the alt.sex.stories.gay.moderated Usenet group. You are a prolific writer, yet you maintain quality. I intend to read more of your stories. The Boss' Toy was nicely conceived; at times I felt very moved by and empathetic with the main character. However, though I am by no means an authority, I felt that the story was strong from the beginning to middle, but then it began to taper off. Overall, though, I've got to say I wish more writers of erotic gay fiction could make their plots as interesting.
Yours Truly,
dj
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Saturday, 28 September 2002 |
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I just read chapter 1 of The Boss' Toy and you have my attention.
I hope that you intend to post the next chapters in this story. It is well written and promises to be interesting.
Thank you.
Busybear
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Sunday, 11 July 1999 |
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Dear Andrej
I will tell you that it is rare that I read stories because I find myself analyzing them, and I lose the magic (it's the same when I see a movie or go to the theater. Sad, but that's what happens...)
However, in your case, I found myself drawn in, and, if I may, I would like to download these treasures and savour them at length. Since they are translated, I am certain that they are more poignant in the original.
I read only 4 of your stories: Nunc dimittis, Cardellino, Il giocattolo del Boss, and Epistolario.
I found myself able to understand, but I am trying not to translate in my mind, and this makes the reading a task at present. However, and still, I found myself totally drawn in. You are a marvellous storyteller!
Now here's the truth: every summer, I go on a one-writer binge... I get everything s/he wrote, and I spend my time immersing myself into his/her world. So: I did not have such a project yet, and now, it is you (and, of course, reviving my knowledge della sua lingua).
With respect
Pierre
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