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1 Wednesday, September 2, 2020 1 16 1
1 Wow!
Your are one of the best writers I have ever read on Nifty. So much story-telling talent and nuance. And where other grind along with groans and thrusts, your characters are built of hearts and minds, with some nice meaty equipment and lusty emotions, but coming from an evolved personality. I first read the Merchant of Venice, then My Ten Models and now enjoying "Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter". What a range of style and characters!

Congratulations on your skill and imagination.

tim H.

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1 Friday, November 15, 2019 1 15 1
1 Hi Andrej,

I've read your story "Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter"

Wow! Congratulations!

Günter

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1 Tuesday, 26 April 2011 1 14 1
1 Hello Andrej,

The 7 Brother's: I found the story very interesting to read and like the idea of good guy's verses the bad guys and the unique way the lads/males all came together.

Saying that it was a bit rough in hearing in the beginning, the roughness of how a group of cow hands used the lad in the beginning. All for their own pleasure and not giving a dam about the lads feelings.

Melvyn, sad but got use to the being used not only by Joe but all the rest, of the men. To learn some were used the same way. Some not many he did not mind. Then he met, Ben, at his age of 25, where now using the nick name of Mel, liked how Ben was shooting and how he saved him from the farmers when they almost got Mel to leave with them for another round up.

Where Ben explained how there is choices in life and if he wanted to he desired, but only in Making love and not fucking. An insert here is a valid and strong point that I agree on that if two agree and they both want to make love, that as said in the story, has to be quiet as people don't understand and between them.

As one can, in today's world be arrested for such actions, even though agreed with each other in making love, at Mel's age of 15... Where he stayed with Ben till he was 19 and Ben was killed and Mel swore he would get them all. Thus after healing the adventure began.

Rufus at the age of 17 and a expert in Knives. Also learn pistols, Peter, age 16, knowing how to use machete and the idea of this unique family: One Dad and many different mother's. Thus the brother's began as Mel said we are all Bastards and well from now on the brothers and our last name Baxter's.

Where they were well dressed gentleman in fine clothes and all with the same cowboy hat. The next? Red Mulligan, known as Red, at the age of 17 and learned the pistols and the art of making love to complete his desires in joining the Brotherhood! As well as the proper dress the brother Baxter's were known for.

Lao King, named Leo joined with his skills to which lead into Marc and Jeff around the age of 19/20 and their expert in pistols now joining in the Baxter Brotherhood! Then arrives 17 year old Jack While Red was recovering and then onto Arizona to settle down Mel the oldest now at 30 and Jack now at 22 al the brother's in-between.

It was even more unique of the Mayor Martin and the one time reunion to have fond memories instead of what happen to him and one of the brothers many years ago. How the Baxter Brotherhood lived and did well with their life's!

Now my thoughts. To which saying in the beginning, did not like how the 13 year old Mel was treated by Joe or the other guys. Though later made clear in the Story that Mel said there was 3 that was loving.

The experience that he learned from Ben was a wonderful setting and one where I feel that Ben gave him the true facts in the man/lad lover and of making love and not fucking. To which Mel learned quickly and really loved it. To where in the developing of the Baxter Brotherhood?

In simple terms it was awesome to see how each other brought something to the Brotherhood in not only their skills, but, the way each of them love. That act of kindness, pure innocent pure love to give to each other. How playful as they may be yet with the exception of Peter a little anxious sometimes, yet the wiser of the group and the others together it all was just wonderful.

Each of them either by just getting to know or rescuing him, still learning as the new clan of the Baxter Brotherhood, they are one in the brotherhood and pretty much dressed alike, style, and their marker the hat. In their private time teaching each other their loving skills.

I loved at the end that Martin got the chance to make a horrid memory into a good memory and loved how the Baxter Brotherhood were true to their word in helping in a round about way Martin in finding the younger man to make him happy away from his love for his wife.

I really like your style of stories that you write and the different time zones with different events. Thanks for sharing with me your writings! Greatly appreciated.

Loving friendship,
hugs, Geno

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1 Tuesday, 18 September 2007 1 13 1
1 Andrej,

Thanks for the user name and ID for the stories. I just finished the Baxter Brothers and was really entertained by the narratives. You are quite a "tale-spinner" as my grand father in Texas was fond of saying.

I look forward to reading the other stories and will stay in touch with you by email.

Your fan and "amigo",
Larry

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1 Tuesday, 01 May 2007 1 12 1
1 Hi! Andrej,

I just finished reading Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter, your old period story set in the Arizona territory, which I enjoyed quite a bit, especially since I grew up in Arizona and know your locations well.

I just figure that you must have grown up on the Rollo May stories translated from the German! It was cute to observe the tell tale slips that just wouldn't go, but something an European wouldn't necessarily catch! However, they didn't detract from your story, as even a lot of Americans, as ignorant as so many of them now are about their own history, would not have picked up on them.

The most prominent one was making Martin MacBride an elected official of the Territory. There may have been territorial governors, but they would have been political appointees, not elected, until Arizona became a state in 1912. I also got a kick out of your "forest" outside of Tucson!!

The interesting thing about your story, however, which you couldn't have known, is how you evoked the spirit of the old Arizona, the Arizona before the "outsiders" came in and changed the state's atmosphere for the worse, which started in the 1930s and continued after the War. It has changed once again now that there have been huge population increases in the last thirty years. The state has been overrun with "snow birds," except now they are there permanently year round. This has made the state much more cosmopolitan than what once was the "charms" of the old west. The old west was largely gone, really, even when I was a small child, but there were definite echoes of it which one could observe here and there.

I would be interested to know if you had traveled in Arizona, or if you just wrote from choosing a location at random for your story?

I'll enjoy reading others of your stories, but I save them to spread out over time.

Cheers!
IJK

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1 Monday, 30 April 2007 1 11 1
1 Dear Andrej,

Thank you so much for allowing me access to the stories on your wonderful site. I have just finished reading Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter and I loved it.

Your stories are just as I remembered from several years ago when I last read some of them. They get you caught up in the characters so quickly and you really like them. And this one was quite different from the others I remember, being set in Arizona. The others I read were set in Italy (surprisingly???). When I saw the locale for this one as Arizona I had to read this one first. Being a romantic at heart, that is the other thing I love about your work. This one, as well as the others I read a while back, was definitely romantic. Yes, erotic as hell, but basically romantic. I love them.

So, THANK YOU for sharing your wonderful talent.

Your fan out in sunny Arizona (where we say "it's a dry heat"),
Bob

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1 Tuesday, 10 October 2006 1 10 1
1 Hello Andrej,

I read three of your stories in the past few days. 7 Brothers for Mel Baxter was fun to read. The plot is simple yet interesting. Again you show in this story your romantic side. This is always appreciated and it's probably the reason I like your stories.

Now for the Cosmolab. That was a great story. Too bad the mission won't start for another 400 years. I would join the program! I liked the ending. The concept of fusion was interesting. It will most likely be possible in the future too. The story is believable and raises many aspects of a male only society. It shows that you put a lot of thoughts in this writing.

A day of Carnival was short but I liked it as well. The drama of the parents learning about the good news... From my point of view it sounded typically Italian. Again, very romantic.

I would like to thank you for making your stories available in English and French (my mother tongue is French.) Thank you for posting In full flight on nifty because this is the way I learned about your website.

All the best,

Vincent

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1 Tuesday, 18 October 2005 1 9 1
1 I have been reading your story The 7 Brothers on the Nifty website and I'm enjoying so much I can't wait for new episodes to be posted, so I'm visiting your own website and look forward to continuing to read the story and all the others posted on the site!! Keep up the Great Work, Andrej!!

Jonathan Rothman
from Yucatan, Mexico

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1 Friday, 20 August 2004 1 8 1
1 I have finished four of your stories: Goldfinch, Black Clover, The Boss' Toy and Happy Xmas Neil & Norman.

It is hard for me to pick my favorite between Goldfinch and Black Clover.

I really liked Goldie, your characterizations are good, and I felt I could see the characters in action reading the story. I was thrown off a little by the geography; I had trouble at times figuring out where Goldie was. Other than that, the story is good.

Black Clover, I think, is probably a shade more my favorite, after all. I recall reading chapters, then I would go home, and wonder where that book was with the Arabian story! Then I would have to shake myself to remember it is on the computer at work!

I feel you did an excellent job on the historical accuracy of the area and times in that story. I feel great that our hero succeeded and did well. Thanks for a great story.

Happy XMas... was the first story I read. I was slightly confused by the back and forth in time frames, at first, but I caught on. It was very realistic how you portrayed the slow blossoming of Neil and Norman's relationship, the confusion, back-tracking, and so on. Another great story!

The Boss' Toy, well, I am glad Sylvio got free of the horrible Don, but I have a hard time reading stories where children are abused/hurt in any way. Even movies showing kids getting hurt bother me. I know these are just stories, but I have a vivid imagination, and I get drawn into the plots as if they are real; that is why I get upset about kids being hurt/killed.

I have started the 7 Brothers story, I'll let you have feedback when I am done.

God bless you, and Matt: many long years together!!

James

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1 Thursday, 20 July 2004 1 7 1
1 Andrej,

Infamous Trade! It is another Great tale of yours.

I have Enjoyed your Beautiful tales for years. Ever since I hooked up to the internet & found your first stories on Nifty I have loved them. I then discovered your web site & began my liking & respecting you as a man not just an Authour. I have so much respect & admiration for you.

I was So happy to read about you & Matt falling in love. I pray & wish, you both, True Happiness Forever!

You have 112 stories. 76 are not translated into English yet. I have read all 36 translated into English more than once. I can't wait until more of the 76 are translated.

Each of your Beautiful adventures has taught me something valuable.

My favourite is Italian Brothers 1 The Corporal. The love between Enzo & Ruggiero is just full of such passion, devotion, loyalty, innocence, humility, strength & weakness. I have read this Love story 5 times.

I have other favourites as well.
I love Chipi, Dear Eugenio, I, The President's Son, King of Sitges, 7 Brothers For Mel Baxter, Snot Boy & We Are Presumed To Be Enemies.

In Snot Boy & Chipi I love the role or power reversal of the two main characters. I just love that it doesn't affect there love for each other.

I think we all dream & long for True Love & I had that for 15 years. Your romances touch my heart & soul.

I know that your writings have been translated by a number of different people & now Matt. If I may be so bold as to mention that you always had them translated with that certain amount of "broken English." This adds a foreign & allusive quality to your romantic adventures. For me, a Canadian, it enhances the romance.

Your web page is Absolutely Fantastic. I now visit the Hunger Site everyday to in my small way help. I found that while exploring your web site.

While trying to bring an end to my email, to you before I bore you, maybe my Favourite tale is you & Matt finding each other. That is ironic but maybe your true life romance & meeting of two souls is the Best.
Thank you Andrej for Many & Many hours of Learning & Enjoyment. I will continue reading your stories new & old. You are a Bright light in my life.

Now you & Matt are also a Bright light in my life.
Ciao.

Gary

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1 Tuesday, 05 June 2001 1 6 1
1 My dear André Koymasky,

I am a gay man, living in New Zealand, who likes to read your stories. Thanks and congratulation to you for making good reading available to me in such a delightfull presentation. I am reading "7 Brothers for Mel Baxter".

Thank you also for allowing your story, "Life Begins at Twenty-five" on the internet for me to read. I have spent the whole afternoon engrossed and at the same time looking forward to the end of the tale so that I can write this letter to you. I want most of all to say my thanks to you and to your revisors. I like your style of writing, although I am uncomfortable with sex stories that have young boys not adult, and I will read many of your writings.

Yours sincerely,
Bernie, in New Zealand.

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1 Friday, 24 November 2000 1 5 1
1 Dear Sir,

I am the person who sent you a piece of poetry from Tennyson. After viewing the rest of your site, I must admit to being intrigued. "The Baxter Brothers" is one of the few pieces of American historical erotica I've ever enjoyed and it is written by an Italian living in Japan. The world is truly a remarkable place. Best wishes,

Steve Germany
from U.S.A.

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1 Saturday, 18 March 2000 1 4 1
1 Dear Andrej;
I thoroughly enjoyed "Italian Brothers 1, The Corporal." As with your other stories I experienced so many emotions.
Thanks again for an Excellent tale.
I also recently read, "7 Brothers For Mel Baxter", "Chipi-A.D.2574", "I, The President' Son". Your tales are very much like pieces of art. Thank you for many hours of pure enjoyment.
I hope you are well and I look forward to all future writings of yours.

Gary

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1 Tuesday, 14 December 1999 1 3 1
1 Andrej,

Great theme, great writing! I've read both parts of "Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter" and look forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing your talent!

Daddy

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1 Monday, 13 December 1999 1 2 1
1 Just had to drop you a line and say thanks for Seven Brothers for Mel Baxter, one of the most well written and sensual stories I've read in quite a while -- keep it up!

Hope you end up posting the entire saga to a website on the net.

Jon

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1 Thursday, 1 July 1999 1 1 1
1 The Baxter Bros.

Absolutely the best reading in years...

I read it non stop! Any more?

Best regards,

Don

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