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1 Tuesday, October 16, 2012 1 10 1
1 Andrej:

I printed "The Closureds' Order", 3-holed into a binder, about 5 years ago, but just now had the time to read the book with much enjoyment. I am now fully retired at age 75 after 54 years as an educator and 46 at my univ. Great story!

THANKS for sharing it with us!

Kent D. (sw Ohio area)

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1 Friday, 16 March 2007 1 9 1
1 I just got through reading The Closureds Order - and it was a very good story. Thank you for it.

Richard

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1 Thursday, 30 November 2006 1 8 1
1 Hello,

I read a few of the stories. The most are pretty good.
The one I liked best till now was the black clover. It had a good story line.
For a dress, a tattoo was also good.

I also read The order of the closureds but I didn't like that that much. It has to much sex in it. I don't mind sex, but this was only sex, with as much people as possible. And also to raise a convent esspecially for sex is a bit odd.

I, the president's son was also a good story. Although I think it a bit excagerated that someone goes that far for a bit of sex (in the beginning of the story). The rest of the story is good. The end is a bit far fetched in my eyes, but that is something personal. Also it was my opinion that they where too succesfull in too short a time to be realistic, but that's not important.

the beach tales were great. Just simple good stories full of good sex.

Thank you for your stories.

Greetings,
Floris

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1 Thursday, 25 May 2006 1 7 1
1 Dear Andrej

Thank you very much for your lovely stories. They are really great. Some are sad in their own way but they still do show your, as a writer, hope for better future and hope for understaning and mutual love.

I have read, until this point, shelves 1 and 2, and as it appears, some other stories from other shelves. My favourite is "We are Presumed to be Enemies". I couldn't stop until I read the last words. The storyline was very exciting, the characters escaped always with only slightest luck, in one time, I though, that it would be real shame if they were to be lost. But that didn't happen and I sighed relieved when they did make to Switzerland after all! God bless the nuns... LOL

Do I have any critcism? Not really. Each story has its own line, follows its own pattern. I must admit that though you are the writer in every occasion, I do not feel as your style stays unchanged. While writing through the eyes of a youth, you find their distinct features and the other way around. No-one can really be always 100% content but you have managed, at least for me, to reach almost that. When I do compare your storytelling and your thinking with those that have been posted on Nifty, I must say that you're a flaming star among them. The only thing that I found even more positive, is, that you have tried some sci-fi stories as in "The Closureds' Order" that I also very much like as I do like these kinds of stories especially. So, please keep going!

My best regards to you and to Matt as well, of course.

Ahto

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1 Thursday, 4 May 2006 1 6 1
1 Andrej,

So far I have read Chipi - A.D. 2574; The Closureds Order; Cosmolab; Counting to 10 (hypnosis); and The Free Commune of Silvana. What I can only say about all the works is that I absolutely love them and think that they are brillant. The way you have the gay male winning or coming out great in the end always make me smile. I especially like how in many of your stories you jump time and fill in the information in the end (like you did in the Closureds Order). Its just great.

If I was required to tell you something about them that I did not like, well it would have to be when you have a major character die. I don't like that, despite the fact that they are usually well-off, comfortable, well-loved, and old; I still don't like it. Other than that, sometimes I find that the sex scenes do not flow with the rest of the section, and that I can't always tell what is exactly happening in a particular scene. Besides those tiny things (which as you can probably guess will not cause me to stop reading) I find your writing style to be great and the stories wonderful.

It is stories such as this that I wish would be in the Gay section of a local book store. It has come to the point that I don't even look anymore in the physical store, knowing full well that there are probably a dozen great stories on the internet that I can read. Anyway, sorry to go off on a tangent like that.

Just so you know, I found your writings first on the Nifty archive. That is, in fact, where I first read the Closureds Order. I followed the link to your site where I immediately lost my head cause of all the great amounts of fiction that I can read.

So, in closing, you are a very good writer whose stories and places cause me to fall in love with them the moment I start reading it. The endings are wonderful but so is the journey.

A Happy Reader,
Carl

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1 Sunday, 9 April 2006 1 5 1
1 Andrej,

I have to tell you that your story "The Closured Order" is the best story I have read in a very long time.

Congratulations!

I am already looking forward to reading more of your works.

Thankyou

Scott
Australia

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1 Friday, 7 April 2006 1 4 1
1 Dear Andre,

I send my thanks for your lovely story The Closured Order. I was totally unaware of your works and so when I began to engage in your story, my wonder and pleasure was all the greater.

Thank you for sharing your vision... your words... your ideas with us. Thank you for taking the trouble to write the story and then (evidently) translating the story into English so that even more of us could share your visions... sitting motionless except for a little smile of enjoyment... the occasional frown of envy... our minds engaged.

It is my hope that you will continue your creative efforts and that I might share each and every one of them.

A long joyful hug for you... and the boldness of a quick soft kiss.

DeLayne

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1 Friday, 7 April 2006 1 3 1
1 Dear Andre,

I am reading and enjoying The Closured Order. for the first time. I have fallen in love with the story. Thank you so much for writing it.

Sandra Howard

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1 Sunday, 2 April 2006 1 2 1
1 Andre,

I am reading "the Closured Order" and am enjoying it a lot. I hope the two finally make love, but that's just me. You may have other ideas.

Gardner

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1 Wednesday, 29 March 2006 1 1 1
1 I just finished reading The Closured Order and enjoyed it very much. I really love this story, so real although pure fantasy. Thank a lot for writing it.

H. S.

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