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1 Monday, February 15, 2021 1 24 1
1 hi Andrej,
I loved your story "Presumed to be enemies", so well written and very gentle in its description of the sex they have together. I have only read part 1 but will read more tomorrow and really look forward to doing so. Thank you for sharing this story and all the others too in your superb library.

best wishes,
steve

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1 Fri, September 18, 2020 1 23 1
1 Hey there. I really enjoyed the story we are wresumed to be wnemies I really did and it was like playing a beautiful movie in my head.
I thought some of the word choices could be improved, such as "bugger someone" could be "to top someone".

But overall very nice and I loved it!
Thank you

jungson

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1 Saturday, July 4, 2020 1 22 1
1 Andrej

I have just finished - We are Presumed to be Enemies - a excellent compelling read

It still amazes me - the broad writing spectrum - so many story variations

I realise the it was written some years ago - and that you are no longer writing - so thank you for what you wrote in the past - please continue to post your stories - many of them please me greatly

Regards

Brian - 68 - from England - relocated to Malaysia

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1 Friday, July 3, 2020 1 21 1
1 Hello Andrej,

My name is John and I am English, I am really sorry not to have contacted you before, to thank you for your wonderful stories, which you write with such passion and compassion. I always read them with tears streaming down my face, you are such an emotional writer. I confess that so far I have read only a few, but will continue steadily so as not to become too dehydrated through loss of tears! Seriously though, I absolutely love the gentle way you deal with sex in your stories, making them an accompaniment to, rather than the primary focus of the narrative . "Dear Eugenio" was so emotional and touching, as was also "life begins at twenty five". As an old man, I love films and stories with a happy ending and I have spent most of my life trying to help others, sometimes I might add, with disastrous results. I am certainly no saint, and have to admit that sometimes my helping was prompted by ulterior motives, but then we all strive to find love in our own ways, I suppose.

Having just completed reading "We are Presumed to be Enemies", you have once again reduced me to tears of joy and happiness. Once again, I apologise for not writing sooner, but I have suffered all my life from a reluctance to put pen to paper, or in latter years, finger to keyboard. I am totally amazed at your amount of writings, and trust that you will continue for a long time to come. I assume that you are French, and are a citizen of France, a country which I dearly love, and where I have spent so many happy holidays and sometimes longer visits.

So please Andrej, stay safe and well in these troubled times, and I thank you once again for all the joy you have brought me, and I'm sure, many others,

John

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1 Friday, July 3, 2020 1 20 1
1 I loved "We are Presumed to be Enemies"

Your stories keep getting better and better, Andrej. Thank you for sharing them with us!

John

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1 Monday, June 29, 2020 1 19 1
1 Dear Andrej,

I've been reading your "Presumed Enemies" posted in the nifty.org site. I'm about to start Part Seven, and must tell you that I've been enjoying your work. (I also visited your website. It's none of my business, but may I assume you and Matt have a long-distance relationship?)

Best regards,
Louis Barr

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1 Wednesday, 30 April, 2016 1 18 1
1 Hi Andrej,

Sorry for the delay in replying, I have been busy reading another of your stories. I read 'We are Presumed to be Enemies' on Nifty and have just read 'The Forceps Mark' on your site. I like the theme of a love that has succeeded despite trials and tests. It is difficult to put into words exactly what I liked in your stories but I know I am hooked on them so will be continuing to visit your site regularly.

Keep up the great work of maintaining your site.
cheers,
*Grant*

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1 Saturday, 10 October 2015 1 17 1
1 Hi Andrej,

I just finished "We are Presumed to be Enemies" and enjoyed it.

I don't usually like such romantic fiction but because of the unusual location and timing of the story, I found it to be rewarding.

For me personally, I would have enjoyed more descriptions of the various cock sizes mentioned in the story. Somehow, a French shopkeeper with a huge salami between his legs, or a German ubermensch with a tiny clit of a cock would have spiced up the sexual tension just a bit. Of course, others would probably disagree but you asked for a critique and I wanted to mention these things. Also, perhaps, there could have been some real dominance and more aggressive fetish activities given the horrors of wartime. Perhaps a soldier might enjoy forcing a young hustler to drink piss or to eat his ass. These are just suggestions, not critiques.

Thank you for being so prolific. I look forward to enjoying more of your writing.

I have a particular fetish for stories that involve massages; i.e. turkish bath massages, Moroccan youth providing massage services to wealthy tourists, etc. Also, for some reason it arouses me when one of the sexual participants is lean and beautiful while the other is perhaps very kind but very fat with a very small cock and huge balls. Would you specifically recommend any stories given these preferences?

Best of luck to you and many thanks,

Bob in Tennessee

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1 Saturday, 10 October 2009 1 16 1
1 Dear Andrej:

I write to thank you for your wonderful stories.

Last night I read "We are Presumed to be Enemies," and this evening, "A Priest Forever." The latter you wrote in 1995, quite a long time ago. Yet, it was new to me. I was very moved by it because it expresses many things that are very personal to me. Thank you for expressing the true meaning of love and the need to honor one's committment for the right reasons -- love.

Thank you for not denigrating the Church in "A Priest Forever" despite the examples of some (an Abbot in this story and many bishops, priests and nuns in real life) who have caused great harm to God's little ones. You understand, well, the intense desire and need of the human soul for love and the goodness of a pure love and this is beautifully reflected in your writings. You are a European and therefore not as affected as we Americans are by the Puritanism that still permeates our psyche and makes us take an Augustinian view of sex -- as if an action created by God is necessarily always evil.

I hope that you have received in Matt some of the beauty of the love you write about.

With Gratitude,

Gary

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1 Friday, 20 March 2009 1 15 1
1 I just read the " presumed to be enemies".

That is one of the best books I have read in a long time. Such passion, I was able to actually be there with all the people and places.

Very good and I am looking forward to reading more. Thanks for the pass word and permission.

John
from Colorado

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1 Friday, 29 September 2006 1 14 1
1 Hi there!

I was really delighted to go through pages and pages of your writing and must say you are a truly gifted writer and hope that you carry on writing the way that you do.

I have been looking for reading material like yours for a long time now, and am proud to have succeeded in finding your site filled with impressive writing styles. I am not done reading all of them as yet, but based on what i have read i reckon you one with "great potential".

You should be proud to know therefore, that i'm now your biggest fan though if you do not mind, would also like to share a few of my ideas with you. Firstly i think the love/sex scenes you try to portray are everything from intense to pleasurable... thoroughly exciting yet for some reason seem to be too abrupt, quick and short.

Please do not get me wrong it's ok to have this style for some of the topics like the one on the "Writings from prison" or even on "We are presumed to be enemies" as the style went well with the situation portrayed but i seem to think to repeat this style over and over would not do justice to all other topics or scenerios you might want to cover. Maybe you should try a different approach from time to time something sensual to begin with that is sensual and not vulger and then you can build up the heat based on that... kind of like soft ball you know... the three basses... seconly i think you should experient a bit with modern day writing as well, giving a bit of "reality of today" to your writing.

Keep up the good work...good luck to you and all the best for the future....

Best regards,

G.

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1 Thursday, 25 May 2006 1 13 1
1 Dear Andrej

Thank you very much for your lovely stories. They are really great. Some are sad in their own way but they still do show your, as a writer, hope for better future and hope for understaning and mutual love.

I have read, until this point, shelves 1 and 2, and as it appears, some other stories from other shelves. My favourite is "We are Presumed to be Enemies". I couldn't stop until I read the last words. The storyline was very exciting, the characters escaped always with only slightest luck, in one time, I though, that it would be real shame if they were to be lost. But that didn't happen and I sighed relieved when they did make to Switzerland after all! God bless the nuns... LOL

Do I have any critcism? Not really. Each story has its own line, follows its own pattern. I must admit that though you are the writer in every occasion, I do not feel as your style stays unchanged. While writing through the eyes of a youth, you find their distinct features and the other way around. No-one can really be always 100% content but you have managed, at least for me, to reach almost that. When I do compare your storytelling and your thinking with those that have been posted on Nifty, I must say that you're a flaming star among them. The only thing that I found even more positive, is, that you have tried some sci-fi stories as in "The Closureds' Order" that I also very much like as I do like these kinds of stories especially. So, please keep going!

My best regards to you and to Matt as well, of course.

Ahto

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1 Sunday, 25 July 2004 1 12 1
1 Hi Andrej,

I just finished reading Presumed to Be Enemies. It is an amazing story, one of the best I've ever found on the Web. Beautiful narrative flow, well-drawn charactiers, fabulous dialogue. It is unusual to find a such compelling narrative that also has hot sex scenes. I particularly like the fact that you translated it yourself rather than having someone else do it; it gives the story an exotic feel and a particularly non-English rhythm. I want to emphasize: You have written a great story.

Respectfully
Griff

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1 Thursday, 20 July 2004 1 11 1
1 Andrej,

Infamous Trade! It is another Great tale of yours.

I have Enjoyed your Beautiful tales for years. Ever since I hooked up to the internet & found your first stories on Nifty I have loved them. I then discovered your web site & began my liking & respecting you as a man not just an Authour. I have so much respect & admiration for you.

I was So happy to read about you & Matt falling in love. I pray & wish, you both, True Happiness Forever!

You have 112 stories. 76 are not translated into English yet. I have read all 36 translated into English more than once. I can't wait until more of the 76 are translated.

Each of your Beautiful adventures has taught me something valuable.

My favourite is Italian Brothers 1 The Corporal. The love between Enzo & Ruggiero is just full of such passion, devotion, loyalty, innocence, humility, strength & weakness. I have read this Love story 5 times.

I have other favourites as well.
I love Chipi, Dear Eugenio, I, The President's Son, King of Sitges, 7 Brothers For Mel Baxter, Snot Boy & We Are Presumed To Be Enemies.

In Snot Boy & Chipi I love the role or power reversal of the two main characters. I just love that it doesn't affect there love for each other.

I think we all dream & long for True Love & I had that for 15 years. Your romances touch my heart & soul.

I know that your writings have been translated by a number of different people & now Matt. If I may be so bold as to mention that you always had them translated with that certain amount of "broken English." This adds a foreign & allusive quality to your romantic adventures. For me, a Canadian, it enhances the romance.

Your web page is Absolutely Fantastic. I now visit the Hunger Site everyday to in my small way help. I found that while exploring your web site.

While trying to bring an end to my email, to you before I bore you, maybe my Favourite tale is you & Matt finding each other. That is ironic but maybe your true life romance & meeting of two souls is the Best.
Thank you Andrej for Many & Many hours of Learning & Enjoyment. I will continue reading your stories new & old. You are a Bright light in my life.

Now you & Matt are also a Bright light in my life.
Ciao.

Gary

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1 Sunday, 9 May 2004 1 10 1
1 simple site, nice, lot's of rainbow :). I can't i love this site "designedly", i just love the content of the site.

By the way, i had 2 award for you, it's for your story "We Are Presumed to be Enemies" and "The Black Clover", both of them reach my deepest heart and i'll send you the gif logo soon.

Adi
from Bandung, Indonesia

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1 Wednesday, 16 February 2000 1 9 1
1 Andrej,
I just wanted to tell you how much I have enjoyed your stories.
My favorite is "We are Presumed to be Enemies".
I noticed in one of your stories, you told of interviews with athletes that are gay. If these are true, could you possibly tell me if the information I have on World Cup Ski Racers could also be true. I was told that many of these guys are gay even though some marry to hide it. I just curious to know if some of the people I admire are like me.

Thank you again and thank you for all the great stories.

Sincerely,
Jodie

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1 Saturday, 27 November 1999 1 8 1
1 Hi Andre

I saw your story "We are presumed to be Enemies" on Nifty stories military section and really liked it. Thanks.

regards

John, London

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1 Sunday, 14 November 1999 1 7 1
1 Hi Andrej--

I really liked reading A Priest Forever and Presumed Enemies. These are good stories.

I am busy with school. How are you? My English is getting better. I am going swimming now, then studying.

Bye

Stephen

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1 Saturday, 28 August 1999 1 6 1
1 Dear Andrej,

I am a 27-year-old American male. The reason I am writing to you is that I want to express my gratefulness to you. You see, I am married to a beautiful wife and we have two kids, yet sometimes I wonder what it will be like to be with another man. God knows, I wanted so much, however, I cannot be unfaithful to my wife. It eats me, drives me crazy sometimes. The Internet has certainly opened up a lot of possibilities. I like to read, I like to see pictures of naked men, fantasizing how beautiful it would be to love and be loved and to make love to another handsome man. I have read tons of stories that are just sex. I enjoyed them a lot but they left me an empty feeling afterwards. I think you understand what I am talking about.

Yesterday, just by coincidence, I read one of your stories "We are Presumed to be Enemies." To tell you the truth, I never liked long stories before, but thank god, I read your story. I stayed in my library the whole night and finished reading "Enemies" and later "The Star's Shadow." I skipped dinner and just read and read until 4 am in the morning. I was breathless!!! I laughed, I cried, and u know, I didn't even remember the last time I cried. To say I was touched is a gross understatement. I was so deeply moved by your characters and the love between your characters. I never knew such love existed!!! It is really an uplifting experience, for you have showed me how beautiful and powerful love can be between two men.

Dear Andrej, I cannot say in words how I can thank you enough. You showed me a world I never imagined, and above all, you showed me love. I feel I am a better man now because of that and for that, I will be forever indebted to you.

Best regards,
Matt

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1 Friday, 4 June 1999 1 5 1
1 I just finished reading your story "Presumed enemies." I found it so skillfully written and was totally enthralled. The plot was just wonderful and the sex was so erotic, a hard combination to find in most stories of this kind.

You are a marvelous author and I wanted so to thank you for that wonderful sample of your writings. To me it was the best I read in all those archives...

YOU ARE GREAT and I would love to read more.
Thanks again.

Orlando

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1 Friday, 16 April 1999 1 4 1
1 I couldn't stop reading "We are presumed to be enemies". I thought I was an exceptional story. Both spell binding and very creatively done, from the first to the last.

Bravo!!

lee

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1 Monday, 12 April 1999 1 3 1
1 I have just been introduced to your work by "We are presumed to be enemies".

I think it is great! I am moved by the setting, very unusual, the issues of war, love and survival! Very important issues explored by the main character, and his attempt to get his love over to Switzerland, has me hanging and afraid for him. Surely his love for his German soldier is over whelming. The issue of struggling for one's gay love among the enemy, here in the straight world, and showing this during war is a very interesting expression of our struggle.

The characters are slowing showing their complexity. Just the setting is very complex, the garden behind the church... How the Partisans were his saviour at one time, and now he is fleeing from them with his German soldier lover. His ability to forgive, to care. To say the least I have had a few tears as the story progresses. I have the feeling that more tears are to come.

There is some of my thoughts, off the top of my head, though I know I am being rather general, but then I don't consider myself a "critique." But as a new found reader of your work I want to try to encourage you with your writings and thank you for sharing them with me. I guess I love your work for I have found myself getting lost in your work, finally being forced to come back to reality when the last chapter has been read. Looking forward to exploring more of your work.

Thanks for sharing your creativity with me!

Love & Kisses,

Dennis D.

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1 Thursday, 25 March 1999 1 2 1
1 I just wanted to send a note to let you know how much I enjoy your stories. I have read several that have been translated into English. I envy your ability to write of different cultures and time periods, and while writing in the first person, make them believable.

I think this was true for me, with 'We are presumed to be enemies', more then any other of your stories. As I was reading it, I felt it was written by someone that had lived through the invasion of France. I know how old you are, so I knew that wasn't true.

Thanks,
Joe C.

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1 Saturday, 20 March 1999 1 1 1
1 Hi...

just finished reading "We are presumed to be enemies" stories - great!!! I have read many of your other stories and really enjoy them. Thanks for writing all of them.

Barney

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