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1 Thursday, 06 January 2011 1 15 1
1 Most of the time I read your stories in french version. You are very talented. With you, we travel to Japon from USA and in Italy.

Which of your stories do I like best ? Hard to tell.

The "white and black", with the Pianist who fall in love for a black cop: wonderful.

Then, most of the little stories about sommer love in "Beach Tales" and particulary with Gino and Dario... and also the one at the end of the sommer when two men stay with their desire find that they can have fun and more toghether, the one with the friends in the vestiaire and the other with friends who pass their exams ... almost all of thoses stories where pretty good.

Alberto and Stefano the mecano and the student...delicious,

You can write and describe feelings so corectly that I just cant stop reading. I still waiting for the last part of the aventure of "Mar Swooney" or must I say of his Son.

You have so fabulous stories that, I'll certainly forget some of them even if they are not less interesting.

Which one I dislike ? It's was a too sad one :the "Dinosaures are hard to die". Two students in english school and one have been betrayed by his brother and comited suicide... this one was not funny... but correctly write.

I think that you're very talented. I have almost forget to tell you about "The Tide Man" the one of a japanese student who fall in love for a fisherman was ..... a Super great one.

I just think that you could write more stories whith two mature men ( 30 why not 40. ) I dont know why is always two yongs men or a yong and mature even in movies. Men are also very sexy and they dont needs to pair every time with a young boy.

Ok. I leave the master return to his masterpieces.

Thank again.
Alvin

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1 Thursday, 11 March 2010 1 14 1
1 Hello.

I never thought I could send you a note.

I used to read some of youre novels "in french". They are most of the time pretty good And among all, the graetest was among "The Beach Tales" so nice with deep feeling sometimes.

I'm not writing this to tell you how good you're , I think that you already knew it.

I was just wondering Why, you wanna do as Mar Swooney's: Vokka, and give up a job that was obviously in a good way....my comparaison is not so good Vokka did'nt find that his father job was in good way. Hi hihihi.

The novel of "Mars Swonney" is really a good job.
I dont like all the prt on it , but certains part was "Fantastique"

The change that the burglar make for the love was so lovely, the loyalty of Moder my favorite character,( before Vokka and the Kresthian friend of Mars,) was a great time of the book.

The way you describe the burial of Tova is pretty similar with the way in a certain part of africa I know, twins funeral ceremonies going on... and even if it's was a gay heros...the best love stories was hetero... I wonder why? In a certain way, gay autor who's describing gay life style as the only and the best are not always among my favorites. But I really find that hetero love stories you describing are more with feelings that most of gay one which most of the time are purely sexual.
Just a point of view

anyway a so great job deserve his end.

With my respect and my consideration

A french reader... To excuse my chaotic english

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1 Friday, 19 February 2010 1 13 1
1 Andrej,

I am currently reading "The Beach Tales". Again, my Dear Andrej, I must reiterate, you are a most gifted writer. Not only are your stories well written, but are believable and could well be true. In some of the Beach Tales, I wish they were factual and written about me.

Thanks so very much for writing. I think in a big part it is because you do change up your writing style and story rhythm, each story does come across as "real". As I read your wonderful stories I often become one of the characters. Another trait I have enjoyed in your stories is the unwritten or hidden message the story reveals. Neat!!

Thanks so very much for sharing them with me.

Yours friend and fan,

Jim

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1 Friday, 24 April 2009 1 12 1
1 Beach Tales

What a fun group of stories...love them.

By the way every year I go to Greve in Chianti to help with the olive harvest. I absolutely love Italy...

Hugs
Dan

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1 Wednesday, 21 May 2008 1 11 1
1 thank you. i just finished the stories in the beach series. very wonderful. those sort vignettes are perfect pick me ups for horny moments....

looking forward to having time to reading your other stories love stories that made matt fall in love with you.

i really admire the work you've done on the site.
here's a shout out from the philippines

ciao
A.N.

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1 Thursday, 10 January 2008 1 10 1
1 Hi Andrej,

Just finished last night "Beach Tales" and "Black Clover ." I enjoyed "Beach Tales" but i was enthralled with "Black Clover". It was fantastic.

Donald

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1 Friday, 06 April 2007 1 9 1
1 Critique? OK, here goes. As a writer, I think I'm in a special position to give one. ;)

I read Beach tales, and I feel like your main aim in these stories is to cram in as much mansex as possible rather than to write the best possible story. My first suggestion to you is to slow down and let the story follow a more natural pace.

Another thing is that there never seems to be straight people, shy people, people who need time to warm up to others, or people who just don't feel in the mood in your stories. It's like "Hey, I just met you six seconds ago, want to fuck?" "Okay!" Not everyone is ready to drop 'em and insert tab A into slot B on a moment's notice, or even think that a man's anus is a good place to put "tab A". Even if you take the (somewhat optimistic) figure of 10% of the population being homosexual, that still leaves 9 out of 10 men preferring pussy over cock. Your characters should actually meet people who aren't interested.

I think you show considerable potential as a writer, but you need to work more on developing a coherent story rather than cramming the maximum amount of beat-off material per page. Writing is not a porn movie - it's OK to take your time and let the money shot wait for later.

(unsigned message... of course!)

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1 Thursday, 30 November 2006 1 8 1
1 Hello,

I read a few of the stories. The most are pretty good.
The one I liked best till now was the black clover. It had a good story line.
For a dress, a tattoo was also good.

I also read The order of the closureds but I didn't like that that much. It has to much sex in it. I don't mind sex, but this was only sex, with as much people as possible. And also to raise a convent esspecially for sex is a bit odd.

I, the president's son was also a good story. Although I think it a bit excagerated that someone goes that far for a bit of sex (in the beginning of the story). The rest of the story is good. The end is a bit far fetched in my eyes, but that is something personal. Also it was my opinion that they where too succesfull in too short a time to be realistic, but that's not important.

the beach tales were great. Just simple good stories full of good sex.

Thank you for your stories.

Greetings,
Floris

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1 Thursday, 29 June 2006 1 7 1
1 Andrej -

Beach Tales - a good read, each tale a gem. L'amore fa passare il tempo...

Phil Savage

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1 Thursday, 22 June 2006 1 6 1
1 Hi Andrej!.

I read your beach tales with great pleasure. They are fantastically well written and very erotic - a complete turn on!

thank you

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1 Monday, 19 June 2006 1 5 1
1 Hi Andrej!.

i really enjoyed BEACH TALES... full of fantasy, meets my taste!
so, I really would like to read more of your stories!

thx, matt

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1 Sunday, 18 June 2006 1 4 1
1 Hi men!

I am reading "Beach Tales" - a delightful sexy super bunch of stories!

Thank you for many hours of erotic pleasure!

Brian

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1 Sunday, 18 June 2006 1 3 1
1 Hello.

I want to write to thank you for the "Beach Tales" stories you have posted on Nifty. They have been exciting to read. I enjoyed all the stories.

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1 Monday, 12 June 2006 1 2 1
1 Thank you so much for "Beach Tales", truly enjoying reading your work.

Larry

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1 Monday, 5 June 2006 1 1 1
1 Hi Andrej,

The chapters of "Beach Tales" were very hot and very well written. Looking forward to your next story.

Best regards,

Cy

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