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Wednesday, 27 September 2006 |
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Hello Andrej,
I've read three of your stories, 'His Foot In Too Many Shoes,' 'The Choice,' and 'Star's Shadow.' I love happy endings. I think you do, too. The only comments that i have is that you take a lot of time building up the plot (which is great) and you spend a lot of time detailing the central part of a story (which is also great). However, I have only one criticism. It seems as though you seem to rush the endings in order to tie everything into a neat little bundle of joy! I thoroughly enjoy reading your stories and cannot put one down until i read every chapter.
I've worked with children all my life and have been confronted with, but never pursued, many situations similiar to Gustavo and Adriano's in 'The Choice,' so I can really relate to that tale. You absolutely described the emotions correctly. However, I have been besieged by both girls and boys and have had to behave circumspectly. At the present time, one of the pre-teen boys from a choir that I directed continues to call me. He has a 'crush' on me. However my family and his are aware of this fact and we all treat him with love and care realizing that he will grow out of it, as he is receiving no encouragement.
I am impressed with the way you bring love into the sexual expression of your characters. Love is so often overlooked. Most people are just looking for someone to fuck. I'm a romantic and enjoy the emphasis you place on the LOVE relationship in your stories.
I'm so happy that I've discovered your writings. I look forward to reading stories that you are writing in this year 2006! Tell me where they are!
Sincerely, Sarina
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Friday, 22 September 2006 |
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Hi A.K.:
I wanted to let you know that I read the story "Akim, Akim..."
I really liked the story. Piero and Akim were wonderful characters, and I liked the simplicity of the story. There were underlying lessons in there, which I also liked, but it was just a pleasure to read.
Your writing has evolved so much! I know this story was written years ago, and to think that "The Choice" is by the same author! This story was still wonderful to read, but wow - you write so well now that you can publish if you put your mind to it (if you haven't already).
I have also wandered around your website, enjoying myself tremendously!
I will keep reading, and writing back as I read your stories. It seems like Matt fell in love with you through your writing. I can understand why. You have an amazing touch.
My best to you and Matt!
Centaur
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Tuesday, 12 September 2006 |
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AK:
I'm writing you a quick note to tell you how much I enjoyed "The Choice"! I have been reading The Choice since it first came out on Nifty, and I was hooked from the first chapter.
Let me say this. My first reaction to the first two chapters was "WHOA! This guy can write!!" I was amazed at your amazing descriptive style. I rarely find stories that have your depth of imagery and character development. And let's just say the sex scenes were out of this world! I mean WOW!
I really enjoyed Adriano and Gustavo together. I grew up Catholic, so I know only too well the worlds that they both live in. I found myself at the center of some of those same challenges in life. You did a wonderful job capturing the intensity of what young men face in situations like that.
I followed the trials and tribulations of the two characters with rapt attention, and I was grateful that the chapters were posted so close together (not realizing until tonight, when I read the disclaimer, that you had written in 10 years ago!).
However, I was sad to see it end after Chapter 15! I wasn't ready for the story to end! I was sad! Is there any hope of a second series about Adriano and Gustavo? How about an Epilogue? Sorry - I'm a little greedy for more of your writing, so I'll go check your website to find out more about your stories. You are an author that is definitely worth reading more of, that's for sure!
Anyway, congratulations on a great story and I look forward to reading more of your work.
My best,
Centaur
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