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1 Saturday, 13 April 2013 1 4 1
1 Hello!

I've read "The Life Wheel", a beautiful, wonderful story... so many times I had fantasized about stories of this kind, between teacher and student, and see written those beautiful situations made me very happy! I could not get away from the PC while I was reading this story.

I am hard to tears, or rather I am too much of a macho, but I can not hide that for the first time a homoerotic story has involved me so much, so much to make me fall tears at the professor's death and again at the end!

Damon

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1 Sunday, 17 February 2008 1 3 1
1 Hello Andrej,

I've read "The Life Wheel" . A comments on your English language use. Personally, I think it is a little formal, but the touch of formality is perfect for the story thus far. It seems to help define the main character, Matteo, as a person with "a duty" and the formality of calling him Professor is natural to the setting, Italy. He is a person of warmth, sexual attraction but with a clear sense of the behavior most conducive to being a successful teacher. He may have feelings of attraction for at least one of is students, but at this time feels that acting on that attraction would diminish his ability to intereact with all the students.

I can see that your style is quite different from many of the writers at Nifty. I enjoy reading some "Nifty Stories'; at the same time I enjoy classical and very modern 'experimental' fiction and non-fiction. My main purpose is to encourage you to maintain the tone you have set thus far, at least for this story.

I've not read any of your other work. When I have the opportunity, I will look at your Web site.

Good wishes and warm regards from Thailand.

Tu

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1 Sunday, 17 February 2008 1 2 1
1 I felt as if I should comment, because I really enjoy 'The Life Wheel' and thought it would be nice, that it is being appreciated.

Felipe

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1 Friday, 15 February 2008 1 1 1
1 Thank you for a terrific story, 'The Life Wheel'. Plausible, but best of all it is a learning experience in human relationships for me, who is somewhat blind socially and emotionally to others... The Italian point of view and Italian wisdom relating to people is a wonderful way to educate those of us who are less wise. I love Italian movies and French movies for their relationship wisdom and content.

Again thank you for a terrific story, I'll be awaiting your future stories,

Teddy

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