Hello Andrej,
I'm reading "The Skinheads Lover". The story line is strong. It flows really well. Each chapter length is a good "read" length. That is to say, it is not too long so that the reader falls asleep while reading it. That is a VERY strong point. You are to be commended for the activity you place within each chapter. The subject of each chapter is treated with speed and accuracy.
One of the things that has amazed me, is the dialogue between the characters. At times there is no reference to whom says what, but I have never lost my place. Truly remarkable. It's a VERY good feature! I have never felt... "Hang on, where am I?" I have never had to go back and re-read the story just to re-establish where I am.
This is a remarkable attribute.
I like the style of using dialogue to tell a story. It becomes very personal. Very quick. The reader's attention never lets go of the story line, unlike descriptive long passages. It's a very IMMEDIATE method. I like it a lot.
The choice of words under these circumstances, has to be correct. They have to display an IMMEDIATE tone. There is no time for "waffle".
It's with those thoughts in mind, that I have attacked the story. There is no time for absolute description. Sure, sometimes, set the scene, but once the dialogue takes over, that's all there should be.
I feel that it is a VERY good way to write a story. The emotions come out in the choice of words.
This is a different kind of story from those that you have written before. Do you recall some of them? Those stories demanded a lot of description and perhaps lesser dialogue. (not that it was wrong for those stories). Those stories demanded another kind of treatment. This story demands THIS kind of treatment... and it's well done.
This story has an IMMEDIATE air about it and it's the correct style for the story. It is being told as if it is happening NOW.
That is the way I view it.
Take care
Stuart