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1 Monday, October 1, 2018 1 11 1
1 I have read the stories you have on nifty and loved them I have read the entire "skinhead" series and they left me wanting more....

PLEASE!!!

I think your stories are fantastic

Lee B.

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1 Friday, February 10, 2017 1 10 1
1 My goodness.
Read all 15 chapters of "Skinhead love" and loved the reading.
You have a real talent for telling the story.
I enjoyed your stories.

GB

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1 Friday, October 14, 2011 1 9 1
1 Hi Andre,

Just wanted to tell you how much i have enjoyed your "skinhead" story. Wonderful! If I can help you in anyway let me know

Regards Richard x

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1 Tuesday, 16 November 2010 1 8 1
1 I loved your "Skinhead Lovers" story on nifty; wish there was more with Sean and Jeremy, but overall it was one of my favorite stories.

Thanks for writing it!

Charlie

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1 Tuesday, 23 June 2009 1 7 1
1 I just finished reading your Skinhead Lovers series and I just had to say WOW. I was completely blown away. You found a perfect balance between an erotic story and a love story. Not only did I get off several times (thanks for that) but I also had to wipe a tear from my eye at the end. The way that you portrayed these boys is remarkable. The conversion from super macho skinheads to loving family was astounding.

I would have never thought Sean and Jeremy would have ended up together. I thought that Derek and Jeremy woulda have been the "big couple." I love how over time each boy learns to accept their feelings for men and how some of them, in the case of Aaron and Robert, have their perspectives on other races and classes of people changed.

You have blown me away with your writing skill and your talent for weaving a beautifully heartfelt yet extremely erotic storyline. My kudos to you and I will continue reading your work so long as you write it. Have a wonderful day and please do write me back.

Your fan in Texas USA,
Ben C.

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1 Sunday, 12 April 2009 1 6 1
1 Andre,

I must confess to you I found your story "Skinhead Lovers " absolutely a most wonderful love story. The way you took the character Jeremy and presented his personality was phenomenally sheer genius. Each time you introduced a new character I instantly fell in love with them all. The last chapter brought me to emotional overload when Chad's father showed up to meet his son's lover Chuck. That final scene brought me to tears it was so tender and loving.

Bert

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1 Saturday, 14 March 2009 1 5 1
1 Hi Andrej

Skinhead Lovers - thank you so much for this excellent and very well written story, I look forward very much to the next one.

Kindest regards
Tony
UK

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1 Saturday, 07 March 2009 1 4 1
1 Andrej,

I just finished reading your story "Skinhead Lovers". It's wonderful, your writing flows very nicely and the characters are sexy, real and well developed. I kept rubbing the lump in my crotch trying to read on.

I quietly dated a skinhead boy in the late 80's and still remember fondly the sexual and emotional dance we did. I could never tell my gay friends I was dating a "fag basher" any more than he could tell his buddies he was screwing a queer.

Tim
San Diego, California

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1 Wednesday, 25 February 2009 1 3 1
1 Hello Andre,

I have just read your Skinhead stories published on Nifty, and followed through to look at your excellent website.

I enjoyed the Skinhead series so far, somewhat better written than some of the offerings on that website. I dip in occasionally and was pleased to find the story.

As it is late, I thought I would get straight on to you after reading the story, perhaps tomorrow I shall write further on my impressions, and have a longer look around your house.

Best Wishes

Graham

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1 Wednesday, 18 February 2009 1 2 1
1 Thank you.

I have already read your skinhead-lovers story (on Nifty), and it is quite wonderful. The characters are believable and they have emotions.
I will send you a critique of each of your stories as I read them.

Curtis

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1 Monday, 27 October 2008 1 1 1
1 Hello Andrej,

I'm reading "The Skinheads Lover". The story line is strong. It flows really well. Each chapter length is a good "read" length. That is to say, it is not too long so that the reader falls asleep while reading it. That is a VERY strong point. You are to be commended for the activity you place within each chapter. The subject of each chapter is treated with speed and accuracy.

One of the things that has amazed me, is the dialogue between the characters. At times there is no reference to whom says what, but I have never lost my place. Truly remarkable. It's a VERY good feature! I have never felt... "Hang on, where am I?" I have never had to go back and re-read the story just to re-establish where I am.

This is a remarkable attribute.

I like the style of using dialogue to tell a story. It becomes very personal. Very quick. The reader's attention never lets go of the story line, unlike descriptive long passages. It's a very IMMEDIATE method. I like it a lot.

The choice of words under these circumstances, has to be correct. They have to display an IMMEDIATE tone. There is no time for "waffle".

It's with those thoughts in mind, that I have attacked the story. There is no time for absolute description. Sure, sometimes, set the scene, but once the dialogue takes over, that's all there should be.

I feel that it is a VERY good way to write a story. The emotions come out in the choice of words.

This is a different kind of story from those that you have written before. Do you recall some of them? Those stories demanded a lot of description and perhaps lesser dialogue. (not that it was wrong for those stories). Those stories demanded another kind of treatment. This story demands THIS kind of treatment... and it's well done.

This story has an IMMEDIATE air about it and it's the correct style for the story. It is being told as if it is happening NOW.

That is the way I view it.

Take care

Stuart

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