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1 Tuesday, June 2, 2020 1 5 1
1 Hi Andrej,

I read the "Lord of Lords" and it is marvelous. Your stories are really fascinating.
I will say that I was very skeptical when I first started reading it. The first 2 chapters are very long in description and that's just not my world. To be honest, I only continued reading because a friend recommended it. But wow, it is incredible.

There are actually 2 things that really surprised me:
• your classification of beings from the plants to the Kaoka and the slaves that are just above the animal but in the same class... It's just so funny. May I ask how you come up with such ideas?
• and the faith. Masu really believed that he was cursed after meeting that witch lady and started giving away his gold without waiting to see any sign of the curse (of course he was generous but still...). Or the time he burnt the Shiti just by putting his scepter on a "god" probably a statue; I am not sure how he knew that would happen. just 2 examples among so many.

This another amazing story!

thank you so much for sharing.

Dan

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1 Saturday, January 24, 2015 1 4 1
1 I just wanted to say that your story "Lord of Lords" is very beautiful. Have you thought about expanding it into a series of books? The title I thought of is: "Walking in the Hand of God. "

You could develop each character's back story as well as write about the adventure itself by using each finger and then the main part of the hand.

Thank you for a wonderful story.

Shawn

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1 Tuesday, 14 May 2013 1 3 1
1 Hello Andre,

Just a short note to let you know that I just finished reading the "Lord of Lords" story. It is a very intriguing story and I have been enjoying it a great deal. I look forward to your future stories.

Please keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

Best wishes,

Bob

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1 Tuesday, 23 october, 2012 1 2 1
1 Andrej,

About your story "Lord of Lords":

- I do not like the 'fantasy' genre. All that hocus-pocus with numbers, colors and symbols leaves me completely cold.

- The Masu character is too perfect. He is strong, smart, beautiful, never afraid, always fair to everyone, always trying to help others, you name it. He is so in the beginning, and also in the end. There is no development in him. The only difference in the story is that in the beginning just a few people know that he is perfect, and in the end the whole world knows.

- As an erotic story, this one doesn't really work for me. I find Masu a complete bore in bed, because he is a stereotype top only. I am a bisexual who doesn't like anal sex. What would Masu think of me? I suspect that in his his limited thinking, I cannot even exist.

On the positive side:

- Like your other stories, it is well thought out and constructed. I like the way many of the personages with 'unfinished business' make a reappearance towards the end, to round off their stories.

- One other constant quality in your stories is the warm humanism, and we find it here too.

RdH

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1 Tuesday, 26 June 2012 1 1 1
1 Hi Andrej,

Normally I never read SF or Fantasy, as the genres do not appeal to me very much. The only Fantasy I ever read with some degree of pleasure was The Hobbit. The trilogy was far beyond my patience, as were the movies.

In the story "The Lord of Lords" there was some of that too. A warrior changeing into a lion, changeing into a snake and then into black dust... it does not make me feel either hot or cold.

But then the story with the young slave was vintage Andrej in it's humanism and warmth.

Ruud

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