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Andrej,
About your story "Lord of Lords":
- I do not like the 'fantasy' genre. All that hocus-pocus with numbers, colors and symbols leaves me completely cold.
- The Masu character is too perfect. He is strong, smart, beautiful, never afraid, always fair to everyone, always trying to help others, you name it. He is so in the beginning, and also in the end. There is no development in him. The only difference in the story is that in the beginning just a few people know that he is perfect, and in the end the whole world knows.
- As an erotic story, this one doesn't really work for me. I find Masu a complete bore in bed, because he is a stereotype top only. I am a bisexual who doesn't like anal sex. What would Masu think of me? I suspect that in his his limited thinking, I cannot even exist.
On the positive side:
- Like your other stories, it is well thought out and constructed. I like the way many of the personages with 'unfinished business' make a reappearance towards the end, to round off their stories.
- One other constant quality in your stories is the warm humanism, and we find it here too.
RdH
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