the library feedback

corner Feedback - Son for a month corner
bottom

logo

top

bottom

logo

top

bottom

logo

top

bottom

logo

top

decorative bar

1 Sunday, December 27, 2020 1 19 1
110 "Son for a Month"Thanks for this wonderful story. I enjoyed every chapter of it. I like stories that I feel I'm a part of and thats what this story did for me. Thank you again so much for it.

John

110
1 1 1
1 Saturday, December 26 - 2020 1 18 1
110 I like your characters in the story "Son for a Month" and their playfulness together. Not sure how old Alda is in your stories, but Alessandro or Gabriel could try a turkey baster full of their sperm in Alda. LOL!! Or maybe Alda's daughter (if she has one) convinces Gabriel and Alessandro into having a baby.

Anyway I do enjoy your stories. Thanks!
Dan

110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 25, 2020 1 17 1
110 Hi Andrei,

I have just read, in one go, your delightful story "Son for a Month". The ending was just what I needed in these tough times.

I am sad that there could be no reconciliation between Gabriele and his own family. I would be heartbroken if a son of mine ran away and I heard no more from him. Of course it would not happen over such a stupid reason and my three sons know that their parents will stand by them no matter what. My eldest told us he was bi and was slightly upset to find that so was his dad! He's married and I now have a granddaughter.

I was gay from very young and only bi ftom my 20's because I could not be openly gay. It was only just legal then and gays had difficulty finding work and it was unlawful in government or armed service jobs. My parents would not have been supportive.

But I was lucky and met a lovely woman when I was 34 and despite knowing I was both bisexual and loved boys, she married me and 30 years later we are still together and one of our sons still lives with us. Our middle son only just moved out to live with his fiancee.

I wish you health and happiness and success in writing more.

Love and hugs,
Tom

110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 25, 2020 1 16 1
110 Hi and greetings from Munich.

I just now finished reading your story "Son for a Month" and truly enjoyed it. It's a wonderful story and I'm happy that I found it.

Thank you for sharing.

Happy holidays and I wish you all the best in the coming year.

Monte

110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 24, 2020 1 15 1
110 Andrej, it's a while since I wrote to you expressing my appreciation of your work. More recently I have been following the story "Son for a Month" and have enjoyed it very much.
Christmas morning has just arrived and I've read that final instalment in bed and it has been a real Christmas treat.
I wish you and yours health, peace and joy at this season and throughout the year to come.
Kindest regards,
John, Scotland
110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 24, 2020 1 14 1
110 Andrej,
"Son for a Month" - another great success in telling a moving love story in another culture. You amaze me with your versatility!
Wishing you all the best of the season!
Thank you!
TW
110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 24, 2020 1 13 1
110 Dear Andrej,

I just finished reading your story "Son for a Month", and am writing to tell you that I loved it. It now means I must read some of your other stories to, hopefully find them as satisfying.
Keep up the good work. It can't be easy writing stories in your native language, and translating them in to English. Thanks for sharing them.

Wayne P.
Fox Point WI
USA

110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 24, 2020 1 12 1
110 Andrej, what a wonderful story yours "Son for a Month" I have read most of your stories and really enjoy your website.

All my best to you,
Ron.

110
1 1 1
1 Thursday, December 24, 2020 1 11 1
110 May I borrow your son, for a month"
I just finished reading all the chapters that you have written up to chapter 11.
Omg, this is so awesome. I was looking for a story to masturbate to.. I found so much more. Your sweet story was filled with such emotion and I couldn't stop reading it. I cried, I laughed, I loved, I desired. I was looking forward to the next chapter and couldn't put it down. Thank you so much for your dedication.
I am looking forward to more. I'd like to see Mr. Gerbini's son and Gabriel together. I'd love to see Alda move in.
I beg you to have please write more and thank you from the bottom of my heart. Merry Christmas to you!
Love Neal
110
1 1 1
1 Tuesday, December 22, 2020 1 10 1
110 "Son for a Month"
I just finished your latest chapter, in which Alessandro and Gabriele are reunited. It is for me a beautiful Christmas gift. Thank you!

I am greatly enjoying your thoughtful, interesting story about Gabriele and Alessandro, and how their lives intersect.

I struggled for many years to reconcile my spirituality and my sexuality as a gay male, so I can relate to Gabriele's strict religious upbringing and his running away from his family in hope of a more authentic life.

I still am very relational and spiritual, so I understand his search for true love, his yearning for romance with Alessandro, and his bitter disappointment that Alessandro did not accept his advances and seemed to regret their sexual encounter.

The story line of Alessandro wanting to create a pretend family to impress the religious and conservative Gerbini is fascinating and also comical and poignant, as when Gerbini's youngest son wants romance. This made me smile -- it seems that there are always gay children in religious families, but the parents do not know this.

I hope the wise Ivano and Alda can convince Alessandro to seek for Gabriele and allow himself the tender and passionate love of a young man who really wants him.

Thank you! And may you be blessed in this season!

Thomas

110
1 1 1
1 Monday, December 21, 2020 1 9 1
110 Hello Andrej,
Thank you for writing the story "Son for a Month"

It is such a wonderful description of a love between two men when the labels are removed and the joy that both find when they are together.

Your chapters are a gentle walk in beautiful garden in which the reader gets to pause and reflect on what is being shown in the story.

I am looking forward to the next chapters. This is such an encouraging love story.

GTM

110
1 1 1
1 Monday, December 21, 2020 1 8 1
110 Hello Andrej
I am, reading your story '"son for a month" and enjoying it. Your excellent website suggests you are looking of someone to read through your stories before publication in order to correct the few mistakes there may be. I am willing to do this if you wish.
John
110
1 1 1
1 Monday, December 21, 2020 1 7 1
110 Hi Andrej I have been following your story, "Son for a month"

It is an exceptionally well written story. Your style brings to life the characters and allows me as a reader to feel involved with the story.

Thank you for giving me a great deal of pleasure and indeed escapism reading your story.

I am now about to start reading your long list of stories. I feel sure they will all be very good.

Kind regards

Tony

110
1 1 1
1 Friday, December 18, 2020 1 6 1
1 I am greatly enjoying your thoughtful, interesting story "Son for a month" about Gabriele and Alessandro, and how their lives intersect.

I struggled for many years to reconcile my spirituality and my sexuality as a gay male, so I can relate to Gabriele's strict religious upbringing and his running away from his family in hope of a more authentic life.

I still am very relational and spiritual, so I understand his search for true love, his yearning for romance with Alessandro, and his bitter disappointment that Alessandro did not accept his advances and seemed to regret their sexual encounter.

The story line of Alessandro wanting to create a pretend family to impress the religious and conservative Gerbini is fascinating and also comical and poignant, as when Gerbini's youngest son wants romance. This made me smile -- it seems that there are always gay children in religious families, but the parents do not know this.

I hope the wise Ivano and Alda can convince Alessandro to seek for Gabriele and allow himself the tender and passionate love of a young man who really wants him.

Thank you! And may you be blessed in this season!

Thomas

1
1 1 1
1 Friday, December 18, 2020 1 5 1
1 Hey Andrej, nice plot in this story of "Son for a month"

Congrats

Jan Verwulgen

1
1 1 1
1 Wednesday, December 16, 2020 1 4 1
110 I have enjoyed the story ""Son for a month"" so far, as well as some of your other work. Just don't let Gabriele leave just yet! One thing I enjoy is the way your characters wrestle with their inner selves. The main figures are always intelligent and likeable; I find myself rooting for them and wanting them to find their way forward. But they also have their flaws, which threaten to diminish their lives far below their potential.

One thing stands out to me in your style: there seems to be a veil between the character's authentic self, and the way they perceive themselves and their coping mechanisms. I find that wonderfully realistic and credible. In my work as a hospital chaplain, some of the greatest moments were those where a patient broke through that veil and discovered that they had the wisdom to guide them through whatever they were facing. The moment they stopped playing roles and instead allowed themselves to act and relate from their core, they felt a surge of vitality and healing. The medical situation they were dealing with often made it possible for them to break through those defenses and to be themselves. When dealing with a life changing or life threatening event, what's the point of pretending?

But more than just that work (and vocation, I believe), it also rings true in my own life. For too many years, there was a disconnection within myself because I was afraid to recognize and own some aspects of my reality.
I was struck by the line, "But a man dies inside if he suppresses his own instincts."
That is exactly what I experienced. I was often flat and emotionless, rational, controlled, but not really alive. Luckily, a mentor who fully accepted me conquered those defenses, not by breaking through them from the outside, but with a love that made them unnecessary, useless, and even burdensome. That gave me the freedom to simply let them fall or melt.

I would love to see that happen for Alessandro and Gabriele - both have developed defensive crusts that deflect their pain, but cripple and diminish them at the same time. The "play" they put on for the Swiss investor, and the motives behind it, as a wonderful metaphor for their entire lives. And both of them could live a full and passionate life if they had the courage to let go of their need for security and control. The barriers that protect them imprison them as well, and they have the keys and don't know it (yet, I hope).

Sorry about the rambling, but I wanted to say more than just "I liked it".

oldvic

110
1 1 1
1 Saturday, December 12, 2020 1 3 1
110 Hello Andrej,
Thank you for creating "Son for a month" and posting it in Nifty.

You create the most entertaining and sensitive stories. They are such a delight to read through a chapter at a time. Your characters come alive and almost real. Your stories leave me with a smile and great admiration for create almost a live movie where we can see all that is happening.

Your descriptions of what a person is thinking adds depth to each character and helps link the whole story together.

I am looking forward to more chapters of "Son for a month".
GreenTreeMan

110
1 1 1
1 Wednesday, August 5, 2020 1 2 1
1 Hello Andrej,

I very much enjoyed your story "Son for a month" and was delighted at the "fairy tale" like ending. It is wonderful to see people happy and united as a family whatever their circumstances may be. Romance is more of what this world needs--love for one another!

Nick

1
1 1 1
1 Friday, July 31, 2020 1 1 1
1 Hi Andrej,

Yes, I had an inkling before now the direction the story "Son for a month" was heading toward, but is now categorically confirmed in chapter 7. I will be hoping for a happy ending--lol. That supposition is based upon personal sentimentality.

Steven

1
1 1 1

back next

decorative bar


corner © Matt & Andrej Koymasky, 1997 - 2020 corner
navigation map
recommend
corner
corner
If you can't use the map, use these links.
HALL Lounge Livingroom Memorial
Our Bedroom Guestroom Library Workshop
Links Awards Map
corner
corner